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I watched the whole thing, at your request, and while the message certainly is ringing with common sense, I don't think it's quite enough to save this... D:
If anything, consider this an experience and keep trying! Look at other animations, be inspired...
All in all, the animation was choppy and the tweens weren't used all that well...
And well, the story made no sense...?
At least, to me it didn't. I couldn't tell what was going on half the time.
Sadly, this will most likely be blammed, or forgotten...
But keep at it!
Keep improving, and come back with something better every time.